I admire your try i thunk you should wrok more on composition and rhyme

Its not about rhyming its about feelings, rhyming is only there to make it look good, rhyming is not necessary in writing poems

Its not about rhyming its about feelings, rhyming is only there to make it look good, rhyming is not necessary in writing poems

Its a great poem however,,as dey said it doesnt have 2 rhyme..but have to go with the flow...i cant feel the enerrgy..more feelings into ur writting would be good...