Fathers are love

by Samantha   Mar 3, 2008


Fathers are called Dad.
Fathers are called Daddy.
Fathers are called Father.
Fathers are called Papa.
Fathers are Love.

Fathers are unselfish.
Fathers are forgiving.
Fathers are busy.
Fathers are fun.
Fathers are Love.

Fathers are givers.
Fathers are comforters.
Fathers are helpers.
Fathers are Love.

Fathers are all these things
wrapped up into one. We have
a day to honor fathers, for all
the wonderful thing they've done!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Hey,
    I like what you are saying here, but I don't think the structure is that good. First, you shouldn't start every line out with Fathers. You could start out the first line with that and then the next line could be "they...."
    Then you could say, "Unselfish and loving and full of care" or something like that. That way, you wouldn't be repeating yourself and it would look tons better. Another thing, make it a bit more detailed about why fathers are so great, grab the reader's attention. Like, "They always make the right decisions" and then give an example or something. Just work on that, and I think this poem could go far. Bye!

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