Comments : The perfect kiss?

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    This is very sweet!

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    This is really good..and sweet!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    "each laugh the longest,
    each tear the saddest,
    and a life, my life, worthwhile."

    The poem was PRETTY good, but that stanza at the end made it amazing!
    I really like that.
    I also enjoy the fact that you dont use big words to express what you're saying.
    Plain, simple, cute, but still elaborate. Nice to see.

    5/5!
    -Alyssa