You're Making It Come Alive Remix

by Kaia   Mar 3, 2008


Down this awful poison
Drown in the pain
Read my lips, unable to
Understand the slurred words
I let you take me in
I know I didn't want it then
The way your hands traced
I cried out and you hissed
This stranger in my nightmares
I remember the feeling
Painless, I think...
The only thing I'm sure of
Is this feeling of loss and betrayal
So do as you please with me
So as rough as you may be
I will NEVER cry over something so trivial...

<<I took the first line or first couple lines of each stanza from my original poem and this is what I got>>

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