This poem I absolutely adored and I'm adding it to my favorites poem list. I will definitly have to keep an eye on for more of your work. This was a friendship poem yet held so much love and could also be portrayed as a romance poem. The warmth and emotion expressed through each line was breath taking. Honestly your emotive language is beautiful. I loved the one line in between each stanza, It was quite effective and really capturing. Overall this is an amazing poem. Well done. ~Mel

The vocab in this poem was really interesting and I loved the structure you used with the 4 line stanzas and then the single line, linking the two together. It's really effective. My favourite stanza was:

"Drowning inside a world of chaos and damnation.
Suffocating on the evil and pollution of man,
You rescued me, brought breath back into my soul
Dragging me out, never letting go of my hand."

5/5

Em xXx

Such an inspiring words. The poem is a tremendous and an enjoyable one. You're one of a kind and a very gifted one. Going through the details of the poem I really love it. Thanks.

This is one of those poems that i cant pick a favorite line or stanza because it was all just great... you really have a talent for writing. good job with this one as well. 5/5

Clever the way you have made the second to last line of each stanza directly relate to the line after each stanza that stands alone. I thought the word choice and flow were good. This is one of my favorites by you. Nice job.