I really and honestly can say that i loved this poem. it honestly is my favorite so far. you can feel the joy, with a hint of doubt. the flow was nice. the only part i didn't love was stanza 7 idk why. it just didn't flow quite right. but this poem is amazing. even if i didn't know the story that comes with it, i wud love it. good job

Hmm i like your poem it is cute.

Flow so good in this. I really really like it. 5/5!

Aww, STOP IT!!! ur not pothedic, u r a poet, and ur such a great guy! ur putting ur self down! quit it! u'll find the right girl that can see all of that in u and more someday, but if u stayed hooked on a girl that doesn't see u 4 who u r then ur never gonna see the girl that does! u deserve 2 be happy.
5/5
xoxo
~me~