by Jend Mar 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
It feels so good when you're around, |
by Tom Swart
Nice words and the best part is it's a short write, simple yet complex I'm sure. keep writing. |
Whooooaaa weeeee gosshhhh i rruly LOVE this! 10/10! it made me feels good reading this!!!!! i cant wait to see someone i really loved in the past, hyperically love! this is reallly perfect!! gossshh, this is a WOW! |
by Hidden1
I can dig this a whole lot. I fee this way about a guy now. He knows it but I can't and refuse to mouth "The Words." to him again until he can love me back. I like how you said so you can feel that this is real. I not only want him to feel it, but to see it. This is a hottt poem. Keep up the good work. Job well done. |