by Blissful
Great final stanza! It leaves the reader with a bang and sums up the poem flawlessly. The meaning and truth behind this poem was profound and you wrote it in a way that everyone can relate and see themselves in it, which is amazing because everyone will find it interesting as I did. Beautifully done dear .. this really makes you think. *5/5* |
by Fear2love
Well written |
Moulding into the shape and shade you wished for, |