HELL YES!!! i love it, u...r....awesome lol, seriously tho, i really like this one, pm me i need to talk to you

Wonderful poem, well written... Haven't talk to you in a while but nice to see that you are still writting wonderful pieces, my Gothic Queen (bet you remember me now, lol) BTW, I put you in for the weekly contest on P&Q with this piece.

I like it!!

WONDERFUL!! AWSUM POEM!!!

Nice and powerful, keep it up
xoxo
~me~

Very good poem. The way you wrote it gave it so much meaning. I'm impressed. Congrats on the win, it deserves it! :) 5/5

Im mad i didn't comment on this one. wonderful poem keep writing excellent this is beautiful lovely. you deserved to win with this one lol. congrads

Awsum poem!!!..Your a really god writer...
Keep it up

xoxo

Beautiful, very moving.
Great work, 5/5.

-mandy :)

Oh God,ur poem is so simple but u know no body can write it the way u wrote it...I am amazed..U r talented..keep it up5/5..

Simple, and i love it. 5/5

In a word awesomeeeeeeeeeeee

I love this.

Really good, and even though it's simple, it says a lot.

Keep it up. :)

5/5

Hey its the first time for me to read ur writings and believe me Im really impressed. :)

This piece is terrific!! The use of emotion is what really carries it and I am so amazed that this is a piece that won. Amazing job.