Comments : Ill Be Here

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Not bad, not bad, i like the recurring format of "i'll be there"

    your servant:
    David

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I like this one, cause you finally dedicated one to me. I will probably miss you when I go to college. This reminds me of that song , "What hurts the most" by rascle flats. About, "What hurts the most, with being so close, watching you walk away..." I will miss you and Brittany, even though she dose not give me the time of day. Well, I will ttyl. have fun and read the new poem I wrote. It seems serious, which it was at first, but is more funny. ttfn. cul8r