by Beautiful Chaos Mar 3, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Liquid screams |
by ben thompson
That poem really embodied the life of many rockstars in so few words. awesome flow, i like this write a lot. 5/5 all the best ben thompson |
While I kind of agree with Kevin in the respect that the topic is overdone, I completly disagree with him in the respect that the three lines he wrote in twenty seconds held more depth than this piece did. I loved this piece. These two stanzas were my favorite: |
by Sarah
Oh nice, a very well topic. The flow was perfect, and the rhyming was wonderful. |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats very good xx |
by Nikkicola
Very Simple but it's great!! |