by Darla Mar 4, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I told you... |
by Lady Nik
This was okay. I think the use of short and long sentences made the poem hard to read. I would mayebe keep them all one length or mix them up in a better way. Not your best, keep it up though. Nik |
by Darla
I told you not to read thiss???? thank you very muchh |
This poem was amazing, that all i can say. |
by Darla
Wow I feel better after that!!! :D:D:D:D:D |