This is amazing, such a touching poem!!!
Hope all is well!!

I just loved this because I could relate with every word you wrote! You described the emotions of a friend moving away flawlessly and you expressed your friendship wonderfully. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced. Overall a great read .. well done *5/5*

Aww this was very sweet! You made it very clear that this person means a lot to you. I like how you used the word "cheesy". I thought that was cute. Although these feelings can never be over-said!
The flow was smack dab great! I didn't find it rocky in any spots, which was very refreshing!
=)
5/5

WOW! I AM SPEECHLESS!

Wow this is a beautiful and an amazing friendship poem and i can relate to it 100% .. i went away to college hours away from home and its hard when you dont have any of your real friends by your side.. the ones that really know you.. i know exactly how it feels and you wrote the perfect poem to describe it.. amazing job.. i loved this poem.. 5/5 from me! keep it up =)

i really loved the ending too.

Oh yea and i just wanted to add..

With you, my bright shining starlets,
Who have always stuck by my side,
You know me better than I know myself
And I feel like part of me has died.

my favorite stanza.. written perfectly. That is exactly how i feel.

I'll never forget to remember you,
Just don't forget to remember me.

I love those lines!! Great job! 5/5

...I'll never forget to remember you,
Just don't forget to remember me. ...

it made me miss my friends even more.... very touching and very well written..
good work..

I can really relate to that right now.
Well done.

5/5

This really touched me
i can relate really well
wonderful poem

I would be soooo happy to have a friend like you.....This poem is beautiful....true friends never forget and will always be there. x x x

I really liek that, its good xx

I sent this poem to my friends back home. its so beautiful but they forgot me anyways