Comments : SeXlEsS OrGaSm

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayzforgottenxx

    This was really good... i loved all you choice of works and how you put them togethher 10/10 xx leahx x

  • 16 years ago

    by Jend

    Nice to read a poem like what you made. Your really good! Kip on writing...!!

  • WOW, I absolutely love this poem girl... you did a wonderful job with it... started to make me hot reading it, lol 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by mzlovehate

    Dis is nice

  • 16 years ago

    by SOxDeepIinxLOvex

    I really like this poem....a lot...like this is the kind of love that i want to have....YOU ROCK!!! Lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Really cool poem this! really well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry, but I didn't think this poem was very good. I liked the imagery, obviously, and what was being said, but I didn't really like it as a poem. The structure and rhymes were all off, for me. Sorry.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    I really liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    What can I say , my mind has melted down and I'm left with an empty head. I am speechless. good write