I really like that poem as u said it really relates to me

I know how this feels. no matter how much you're there for them. it still doesn't mean anything. and you feel like you've been forgotten. but this poem was nice. good stuff. =)

Really nice poem, " youre cold to me you hurt me you use me yet i stuck around " this is very nice, kinda explains you whole poem but i guess it should be, " you were cold to me, you hurt me, you used me, yet i stuck around. " I bet commas helps maintain the flow. Good work