by Screenager Mar 4, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Shot through spaces of infinite time. |
!!!!! Nice little allusion there to Sunburn :P This is a very good poem, the only thing that I would say is that you should take out 'a' in the 2nd stanza, 3rd line. Very good!! |
I like it a lot. I like the stars are all in .. etc.. it's my favorite part. |