Two People

by Simply Josh   Mar 4, 2008


Torn between two people,
Torn between tow hearts.
Torn between two smiles,
Two images that won't part.

Two contrasting personalities,
Both lovable and cute.
Hopefully choosing one over another,
Will not lead to a dispute.

Nor to a broken heart,
For I can't deal with such sadness.
A friendship - to be content with,
In this world of madness.

The decision I don't want to make,
The consequence too overbearing.
Seeming unjust and improper.
I am not that daring.

So I'll simply wait,
On them to decide.
Come what may,
I'll take the ride.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very good poem, Josh. Every sentence was written perfectly. Words deep, and thoughtful. Great imagery. 5.5

    Take care,

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very good poem, Josh. Every sentence was written perfectly. Words deep, and thoughtful. Great imagery. 5.5

    Take care,

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A great poem. Very nicely written and well thought out. :] The first stanza really caught my attention and held until the end.
    "Torn between two people,
    Torn between tow hearts.
    Torn between two smiles,
    Two images that won't part."

    ^my favorite stanza^
    :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Beautiful

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Simply Josh