Its Been 2 years Now;; Flashback

by jenna grace   Mar 4, 2008


Hey there
do you remember me ?
ohh.. maybe not..
it's me cant you see ?

that little girl
so innocent and vain
left all alone
whose now trying to stay sane

flashback;; 2 years go
when my world came crashing down
when i lost all trust and love
when his casket hit the ground

don't say your sorry
or that it wasnt my fault
or that it;;ll all get better
because I read hit letter

so many lies i was told
that i finally cried myself to sleep
so many dreams i had dreamt
that i finally just let my dreams go;; is that weak ?

it's been 2 years now
but it feels like he's still here
lets just flashback
a couple more years

copyrighted jenna 3.1.08
*r.i.p. pahhh 3.6.06;; your gone but not forgotten.. ily<3*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hello
    I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
    I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
    You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
    Thanks alot
    Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    FABULOUS(5/5)
    I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
    Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
    Love
    Junaid

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great job this poem was packed with sad emotion and i really enjoyed reading it.
    Excellent job ^^
    5/5

    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Wow sad...i felt all the emotions.....Beautiful and sad...i don't no what else to say hun...Keep up the great work though!

    Jenna Bignell

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Arghh that was really sad...good poem thoough very detailed with your emotions good job