Your Smile

by 0oAshleyo0   Mar 4, 2008


As i see your sympathetic smile,
Silent Tears run down my cheeks...
It hurts to know that you don't care,
that you never did...

So I'm letting go
I'm almost over you,
almost over my fears of loving you...
then you smile...and it all rushes back in.

the tears...

Pain...

forbidden love..

I was almost there...
almost let you go...
but you had to smile...

XxAshleyxX

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Wow I LOVE this poem of yours!
    I like the first stanza;; The last words of the 2nd and 4th sentences work heaps well together;;
    The ending is excellent too; I like these sorta poems that don't rhyme all the way through, but they somehow "mesh" together nicely... Haha I sound weird Lol But yeh great poem hun;
    Addin' this to my favourite poems :D

    5/5 for sure!

  • 16 years ago

    by IMissYou

    Wow this expresses exactly who i feel about my ex! Great poem..x

  • 16 years ago

    by Jahieda

    I feel you on this poem. thats how im feeling

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    The smile of your old love makes you want him back so find someone with a better smile.lol great poem=)

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Wow that was really deep! i love it so much its the best poem i have seen on here! i love it it rocks!

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