Thats pretty good

Wow!!

that was pretty intense in a very sexy way

Cupid isn't stupid. He aim is pretty good, he may have missed the target in your sights on purpose as he knows the game. hang on for the next shot of his bow. It may find home next time. patience is a gift. peace - may all your writes find willing minds to listen ...

Awww, this poem was very beautiful and sad. but Tom is right. Cupid may shoot his arrow true when you've found the guy right for you. great poem. =)

I really liked this one. great job!

I like this poem its nice, there is a misspelling in it but im sure if you read it again youll catch it...great job!

Thank you for the comment...

<3 Joclyn

I like this one alot:)
5/5

Thats really good!

Aw give cupid a taste of his own medicine. Tell him to stop messing up lol. Awesome poem.
-vino

Wow, good write! You were right, I did like it :]

Very deep. I like the truthfulness of it, love is not anything that all of a sudden happens and is perfect. and most of the time it ends up broken and with alot of thoughts that aren't too happy. good read!

I had forgotten that I read this poem already.
Why haven't I commented it...

It's well thought out.
I especially like the part about cupid.

Some of the rhymes seem juvenile, cupid + stupid, but's it to good to bother me.

Wow this poem was great i loved it.....5/5

*nicely written*

This poem was well written!!! and a lot of emotions many can realte to me..Nice work
keep it up

Thank you for the comment on my poem and yes you can post it somewhere.

I like this poem, it makes you think. Most poems writtten about cupid are happy but yours stands out and is original. Keep it up

This poem was great!!! alot of emotions and the flow was great!! 5/5

A-mazing! 5/5 all the way. that was soo soo good! your an amazing writer, keep up the wonderful work. ~KM~

One lonely girl
One lonely heart,
One lonely hand,
One lonely mind.
^^
This really got my attention as to how you were going to continue your poem. so a really good start!

So scared to start again
Not ready for that step,
She has been hurt so many times,
You'd probably lose count to.
^^
You captured some feelings that many people fell throughout their 'love' life and I think you have put it into a good perspective here.

Flowers never blooms
Sun never shines,
It's almost dark out,
Music is her escape of people around her,
Poetry is her escape of life,
When times get hard it's always here for her.
^^
I think that this stanza doesn't completly fit with the rest of the poem, it fits with the stanza before hand however I don't feel it fits with the one below.(That's just my opinion.)

I used to believe in cupid
But know i think he's just stupid,
I dont see an angel with little white wings,
I dont see him with the Arrow drawn out ready to shoot us into love.
^^
In this stanza you may want to fix up some grammer, as for some people without the correct grammer it is hard to read.
.Arrow should be arrow. dont should be don't.

But know i see an angel lying dead on the floor
Black wings,
Blood dripping out off his chest,
From where i shot the arrow
^^
Shouldn't know be now??
However it is a strong finish to the poem as you have 'turned the tables'. (If you get what I mean.)

Overall a really good poem, just be careful with your grammer and how many lines you are using to a stanza as it is a good idea to have them all the same length.
-Just my two cents. =]

That was very deep. good job : )
keep it up