Ha! Believe me when I say I chuckled a lot while reading this!! The very first line of the first stanza caught my attention. Great use of words and flow!

Hahahaha!! that's really cute! Very good poem, definiately got a laugh out of me! & it's true, our dogs are better men. lol! they don't back talk you!!!

Haha
that was really cute
i enjoyed it
i thought thered be some twist at the end
you did a very good job
lovely read
5/5

Woah I liked it. It was very catchy....it had areally nice flow too

Wow, this one was one of the best poems I ever read that was actually funny. The flow in this was great. The feeling in it was also great. Good job!! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Tehe i thought the ending was funny.i had to back and read it again so that i knew you were talking about pete!!Good on my favorites and so are you!

AMEN! i love my dogs more when i meet boys.....dogs are just so amazing. boys are just...well, you know. this was absolutely hilarioius. the end surprised me though. lol..good job

Thats very sweet =] Hurray for dogs!

This is an amazing poem. I love it and its quite true. I'm adding this to my favorite poems and you my friend keep writing. Its funny and great. And you seriously have talent.

Very funny but I have one question? Just why exactly can women not put the toilet seat up? lol. Anyway, excellent poem!

Lol, I'm sure that you're aware that not all guys are this way. There are a few of us chivalrous, kind-hearted gents out there. (We are in short supply though)

I really liked this poem for the good natured, fun piece that it should be read for. It doesn't actually open fire on us males, merely pokes a light-hearted bit of fun in our general direction.

The only critique that I can have with this (and it really miniscule) is that it was over very quickly. I would have liked to read this a bit more. Maybe just 1 or 2 more stanzas. Although that could just be my male attitude of wanting more than I am alllowed. :)

My favourite lines...

"He appreciates my cooking, even if it's burned,
And he never leaves the toilet seat up-turned."

Overall a lovely poem, that I would have really liked to see slightly more of.

p.s (for all reading this comment)
I'm not her dog, just another random guy named Pete. Although a dog that could type would be really cool!

~Pete.

Haha i loved it it was such a cute funny poem im sorry if anyones given you crap about it but i think its funny and parts of it are true i love the dog part

Cute. very true =]

Haha a genius poem! Perfectly written and i think it's safe to say that this poem is very relatable!

His hugs are always warm and protective,
And monopolizing the remote is pointless in his perspective.

My favorite lines! THat's all you need in a good relationship... warm protective hugs... and a guy that lets you hold the remote conttrol .. haha not really but those are two very important things!

very nice job writing this poem! I love it haha.. keep it up! =) 5/5

Awww!!!
This was so hilarious and cute! It just made me start smiling and now I can't stop! I lovedddddd ittt!!!!!
The flow of it was really smooth too, the whole poem seemed so effortless.

"It's just the more boys I meet,
The more I begin to love my dog, Pete."
^Haha. I couldn't agree more. [except my dog's name isn't Pete. lol]
I have to go add this to my favorites now.
5/5 [if I could give you anything higher I would]
~gabriella

Very nice, simple and to the point. and of course cute.

I think most agree that the first stanza was the best, but toward the middle the rhyming seemed a little forced... other than that, it was very funny and true...
keep writing
tim

Very well done! The flow was good, exept for one part:

It's just the more boys I meet,
The more I begin love my dog, Pete

The flow was not as good as the rest of the poem ( but I'm not saying it is bad or anything) I was just thinking maybe you could change it a little:

But the more boys I meet,
The more I love my dog Pete