The Debate

by Hidden1   Mar 4, 2008


This poses a huge problem for me. See I've fallen head over hills for a man who doesn't even acknowledge me.
A relationship is by far not a part of the plans. So I'll have to be for him his right hand man.

Baby girl, I told you it could not be, for I am alone only committed to me. Just released back into the wild needing time to nurture my inner child.

I told you I understand and I will give you all the space you need. Just like a child is taught, think of what you do before you do it. Yes you are back into the wild, unkept, and untamed. Free to roam about, wandering aimlessly in the wild. Searching to find what you left behind. Reflecting on the man you used to be.
In the wild, your left wounded, bruised, and maybe even scarred.

Scarred and scared, Scarred by my past and scared to repeat it, so I retreated to a place of freedom- where I don't need'em. I'm da man, a loose beast in the land on the prowl, so oh please bow down. It's feast or famine so I'm cramming all I can, until I can't stand to continue the MENU. That is where u want to be, after the n and behind me-because u after the n and behind me is ME-N-U and that I can't do.

So you can't do us and in the end that will be your loss. While you are feasting, just remember to count up the cost. You will starve looking to make amends with your past, deal with it, get over it and move on. Time heals all wounds, not roaming and having a feast. Find someone who can help heal and assist you to your inner peace. Yes I want the ME-N-U, but waiting while you roam is something that I can't do. I will bow down and kiss your feet, not to be a door mat and have you walk all over me. Keep in mind that the King of the Jungle can be knocked down. Make sure you have your prey there to applaud while another beast takes your crown!!!

WHOOOA!!!!!!!!!!

Written with Brokeboy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Well done and very interesting. I agreee with Kim and find that we probably have all been in this boat at some point in our lives.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kim

    This is amazing ! Well done! It's like your speaking for everyone who's ever felt something for someone. Well done x