Black whole
by devils angel sunrise Mar 4, 2008
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A black whole is where my heart used to be |
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16 years ago
by SpEcIaLmE
That was short but still sad
just to let u know i think the whole u r refering to is meant to be"hole"
this poem is good at the length it is but maybe try expanding it to get more emotion and let the reader create a better image in their head
the flow was good, overall the poem is pretty good
great job -
16 years ago
by StandStill
You mean hole? lol. this is great, actually. leave it as whole. because it's like you've left a wholeness of black...ggreat job.
