by Kitten Mar 5, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Late at night, I wish on the stars in the sky. |
by Kaila
I really liked this poem and right at the moment I really do connect with it a lot. There are some things I'd change though. The first line in each stanza the words are good but the arrangement was a bit weak so I'd work on that. Otherwise I thought you did a pretty good job! |