This was hauntingly awesome, the repetition was really effective and the imagery was spot on (if not a little disturbing). My favourite stanza was:

"With other girls
You may flirt
Stay With me
I'll keep you free"

The opening was really strong and drew me into the rest of the poem that was really easy to read because of the natural flow yet awful to read because of the raw pain of the words. Loved it!

5/5

Em xXx