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by StandStill   Mar 5, 2008


Love
twirling on a rope
catching the light
reflecting hope

the twirl
is slow moving redemption
for in love
one can only find creation

and in the spin
the light does catch
and innocence
will once again patch

these wounds in the heart
will fade away
when you see the beauty
placing itself in your heart, here to stay

so watch the beautiful light catch
this redemption on a string
never in this world
will someone see a lovelier thing

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh, wow...
    I love this.
    Great poem from the first to the last line, very effective and original. I like the flow that you created, whole piece has interesting rhythm and rhymes.
    Your choice of words is really good, too.
    Whole atmosphere of this poem is captivating.

    Keep up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by devils angel sunrise

    Hey my beautiful angel knows more than its seem good job melts hearts those words of yours

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