Vampiric mind

Very short which i like.. very dark and wicked. I like the repetition, good job mate

Another short write. But this one was much better than the others. Sometimes it's nice to keep it simple. Good job. 4/5

I wasn't a big fan of this one. I think you could do so much better with the concept. It's not the length that bothered me but the fact that you repeated yourself so much and used very simple words. There was nothing that made this stand out to me. Keep working on it hun. Nik

Though short and dark it seemed to satify my parasitic mind

Once again its very repetative and simple and not that I don't like that style its just your poem is to short. You would be a much better writer if you took more time on your poems, made them longer with more detail. I gave this a 4/5. nice job