A Teary Cheek & Me A Freak

by RedDeadShore   Mar 5, 2008


One final downhearted night,
I close my eyes really tight,
I sit on the edge of my bed,
Knowing tomorrow Ill be dead,
The tears stroke my cheek,
Ive been called such a freak,
The abuse and neglect reminds me,
That there wont be another plea,
I have no one to aid my troubles,
Each day my crisis only doubles,
My trembling palm holds the blade,
Ive been forgotten since first grade,
I slowly place the blade into my wrist,
With a sense of an aurora of mist,
My tears plunge onto the floor,
I tear and slash and I see the skin I tore,
I cup my hand for the blood to puddle,
Now theres no room for a soft cuddle,
I begin to feel faint and pale,
My life is nothing but a short tale,
I have ended a journey of despair,
For I hope no one has to share.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really don't do much of these cutting poems but here it goes. The description was good and the vocabulary was well played out the structure was fine and well the message, Well I would read something more suitable to my taste I gave it a 4 good job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Very sad poem, but it is amazing. This poem was very well written. The flow was great along with every other element. I can't find a thing to change. Great Job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    This was a good poem.
    I thought the word aura would've been better than aurora.
    It just seemed to make that line to large.

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Wow!!! great emotion! but someone said above ^^ poems dont have to rhyme (dont get me wrong - this is stll ace) just try not to force rhyme, well done 5/5 (id vote higher if i could!)

    suicidal love xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, this poem contains such emotion its amazing =] I rated it a 5 the vocab that you used really makes an effect on the reader xxxxx Mwah xxxx

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