I love this =p

You have a choice to make for your self to either move on and forget her or to hold on in hopes she will come back. they always say you won't forget your first love which i find is very true. i would never go back even if i want to though cuz of some things that happend. But i have to say good luck to you with one of the biggest deisions you need to make. if it wasn't really ment to be you will find another sometime in your future for there is someone out there for everyone. good luck and i love you poem it shows alot of emotion and is strongly writen. 5/5

You have a choice to make for your self to either move on and forget her or to hold on in hopes she will come back. they always say you won't forget your first love which i find is very true. i would never go back even if i want to though cuz of some things that happend. But i have to say good luck to you with one of the biggest deisions you need to make. if it wasn't really ment to be you will find another sometime in your future for there is someone out there for everyone. good luck and i love you poem it shows alot of emotion and is strongly writen. 5/5

5/5

Just go get away baby
take my mind too
everything that attaches me to you

^^This was my favorite part. I loved the way you wrote this poem. it was so deep and the mixture of lost love and pain blended together beautifuly. You are a very inspiring poet. I'm glad you read my work. keep it up
5/5
~Forever Broken~