Comments : Lost

  • 16 years ago

    by Laith

    Well, if you are lost
    then what am i
    my eyes were stolen
    so i do not cry
    maybe it's better when i don't see
    all these devils roaming around me
    so my tears turn into hate
    and i become so out of date
    so old and so damned classic
    but though i think your poem's fantastic

    very nice one, really I loved it enough that I wrote a poem as a comment, you insprate my thoughts.

    • 2 years ago

      by Jodie

      You may of said your out of date, but my reply is 13 years late, I'm still Lost in this world full of hate, I'm staring at a mirror trying to see a reflection of the me I use to be, all I see oscan empty shee staring back at me,

  • 16 years ago

    by Laith

    Well, if you are lost
    then what am i
    my eyes were stolen
    so i do not cry
    maybe it's better when i don't see
    all these devils roaming around me
    so my tears turn into hate
    and i become so out of date
    so old and so damned classic
    but though i think your poem's fantastic

    very nice one, really I loved it enough that I wrote a poem as a comment, you insprate my thoughts.