Lovely

Good Job!!! 5/5

'tasting destruction'

^^ loved that last line!

Nicely done.

I always enjoy reading haikus but can never write them myself! I like the fact that this one isn't about a perfect situation like most are, it makes a nice refreshing change. Another 5/5

Em xXx

Wow the last line is so powerful. I love how you made it so sweet and wonderful in the beginning, then you go and do a complete 180 and talk about polution and the death of nature (at least thats what I thought it was about) nice job.