So powerful your words are, sounds like what im going through great

I don't know how the contest went/is going, but I do believe this is contest worthy. The fact that it rhymed in some parts made it all the more believable, heart-felt, and sincere.
The consept of this person, being just another human, just like everyone else, was a good idea.
Your words are very powerful, and I enjoyed this.
I absolutely LOVE the title =)

5/5

I really enjoyed the theme of this poem, and your choice of metaphors are outstanding. I like your style

Excellent!

It was another great write. I love your style and metaphors that you used. Awesome. I don't what to say. It was superb!

Keep on writing
Veamm

I truly love this poem. It's not just a poem but it's an inspiration and it carries a message to people that they should never give up no matter what they are facing in life.

I have to admit that you have talent and I'm definately going to add you to my favourites list! You're amazing!