I'm In Love With You

by Bugg   Mar 5, 2008


I want you to sweep me into your arms
And tell me that you'll never let go.
Wrap your strong arms around me
And always keep me warm.

I want to feel your lips against mine
And feel your fingers gliding across my cheeks.
Pull me close so I can hear your heart beat
With you so near I know I'll be just fine.

I want to lay my head on your chest
And fall asleep with a smile on my face,
Because for that moment I know you're all mine
For this moment all the puzzle pieces are in place.

I want to find out exactly who you are
And be one of your best friends
You could tell me everything
Because you'd know it'd be alright in the end.

I want to be your first lover
And have one special night with the one I love
I'd make sure you knew how I felt about you
Then you'd know everything I ever said was true.

I want you to ask me for my hand in marriage
And ask me for my whole life
I'd be so happy and joyful
I couldn't wait until the day I became your wife.

I want to see the world with you by my side
And we'll see things no one's ever seen before
We'll walk side-by-side, hand-in-hand
That way everyone will know you're my man.

I want to grow old with you
And die on the very same day
Because even one day without you
Is enough to take my breath away.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    "i want to lay my head on your chest
    And fall asleep with a smile on my face"
    that was my favorite part. i loved it. its so cute and sweet<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    I wanted to use 'take my breath away' in a sense of death, but also in a positive way, too. When we 'fell in love' in the beginning of the poem, he took my breath away and in dying he's also taking it away because he's gone. I can't really explain it, but that's the best way for me to say it.

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    "take my breath away" is usually used in the positive sense, but here it almost seemed negative. Not sure if you meant it that way or not. None the less, I think the ending was fine. Little more work on the body though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    I actually wrote this for a guy that I really like. I wrote No More Fish for him too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Dunno. The first couple of lines are okay, but the ending is a little weak. I'll have to fix that, eh?! ^.^

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