Baby Story (big bang to big push)

by Mr. Darcy   Mar 5, 2008


0-5 weeks:
Although my life is so brand new
I've been traveling now for days.
My journey needs to take me
To a soft, safe place to stay.

I feel a sense of weightlessness
As I'm floating up and down.
My hands are forming fingers
But cannot yet wiggle them around.

5-10 weeks:
My heart has started fluttering
And my body is changing shape.
My head is resting on my chest
Which now grows at a steady rate.

As I'm stretching out a little
I can feel my legs and arms.
I can taste the fluid I float in
It doesn't do me any harm.

10-15 weeks:
I may not look like a tomato
But I am of a similar size.
And the latest report is
I now have lids over my eyes.

My colour is rather red
And you can see straight through my skin.
I'm developing facial features
Including a lovely chin.

15-20 weeks:
I'm also developing sexual organs
They too still need to grow
Which is handy for my parents
Just in case they'd like to know.

My muscles are much stronger now
I can move my arms and legs.
I'm able to grab my umbilical cord
And scratch my tiny head.

20-25 weeks:
I'm about the weight of a small can of beans
I jump when I hear loud sounds.
I like to move when you're resting
And sleep when you move around.

My skin is looking wrinkled
That will change as I lay down fat.
I have nipples and my teeth are formed
And I can hear you when you chat.

25-30 weeks:
I have what is known as a righting reflex
So when I'm spinning round and round
I can tell if I'm the right way up
Or simply upside down.

With the beat of your heart and digestive gurgling
It's noisy in here yet nice.
I can open my eyes and almost focus
Wow wee, they sensitive to light.

30-35 weeks:
My brain can work much faster now
And I'm learning all the time.
When you eat your favourite sugary foods
This amniotic fluid taste just fine.

I hiccoughed this morning it made me jump
As my chest moved up and down.
I'm now aware when its light or dark
And can make sense of different sounds.

35-39 weeks:
My weight is piling on now
About 18 grammes a day.
This will help with the lower temperatures
When the big day comes our way.

Now I'm laying in your pelvis
My once big world has become so small.
Facing down and gently pressing,
Against your cervix wall.

My final week:
The bones in my head are of a clever design
They are able to overlap
This should help prevent me from being squashed
In case my head is a little fat.

The day is nearly here
For the workout of all time.
Our bodies will work together
I'm sure we will be just fine.

I'm ready for the big wide world
My growing in here is done.
This day has been a long time coming
In a few hours I'll meet my mum.

© Copyright M. Moran
1999

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow!!! I almost missed this masterpiece from Mr. Darcy too!
    This is a great poem Michael. I'm speechless at your talent for writing such great verse!
    Magnificent work!
    I love exactly the same lines that Ben likes in this poem! A classic write Michael.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael
    I am so happy I stumbled across this one as I was glancing through your back catalogue.
    As a parent, this really touched me and reminded me of that exciting time when my wife was pregnant, and each passing week saw us delving into the maternity books to see how the little bmp was developing! It literally took me back to that special time, so thank you for that.
    These are just a few of my favourite weeks in your poem:
    weeks 15- 20 - ...."just in case they need to know". This stanza had me in stitches.
    Weeks 25-30...."I can tell if I'm the right way up or simply upside down." - brilliantly funny again.
    And then, of course, the last stanza of weeks 35-39....."In a few hours I'll meet my mum." This left a lump of happiness in my throat.

    What's particularly lovely about this poem, Michael, is the fact that the baby is telling the story in the first person which adds a huge amount of humour and (especially) an awful lot of warmth to the piece.

    A really lovely write. Take care and all the best
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Hello Ben,

      Wow, I had forgotten this poem too. Thank you for reminding me and I am glad you enjoyed it. Our children grow up so quickly that we do forget the very early days.

      Thanks again Ben. Do you have any special poems from that time in your life?

      Take care,

      Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    Love how ur writing from the babies point of view...quiet interesting...keep writing great poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Chrissi xX

    That is such a brilliant poem. Makes me wonder how people can think of abortion, though i know in some circumstances there's little choice.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    That's an adorable poem. i love the point of view. great job!