Comments : Baby Story (big bang to big push)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    Excellent poem!
    I Love your view of writing it from the baby's point of view. Keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    That's an adorable poem. i love the point of view. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Chrissi xX

    That is such a brilliant poem. Makes me wonder how people can think of abortion, though i know in some circumstances there's little choice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    Love how ur writing from the babies point of view...quiet interesting...keep writing great poem...

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael
    I am so happy I stumbled across this one as I was glancing through your back catalogue.
    As a parent, this really touched me and reminded me of that exciting time when my wife was pregnant, and each passing week saw us delving into the maternity books to see how the little bmp was developing! It literally took me back to that special time, so thank you for that.
    These are just a few of my favourite weeks in your poem:
    weeks 15- 20 - ...."just in case they need to know". This stanza had me in stitches.
    Weeks 25-30...."I can tell if I'm the right way up or simply upside down." - brilliantly funny again.
    And then, of course, the last stanza of weeks 35-39....."In a few hours I'll meet my mum." This left a lump of happiness in my throat.

    What's particularly lovely about this poem, Michael, is the fact that the baby is telling the story in the first person which adds a huge amount of humour and (especially) an awful lot of warmth to the piece.

    A really lovely write. Take care and all the best
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Hello Ben,

      Wow, I had forgotten this poem too. Thank you for reminding me and I am glad you enjoyed it. Our children grow up so quickly that we do forget the very early days.

      Thanks again Ben. Do you have any special poems from that time in your life?

      Take care,

      Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow!!! I almost missed this masterpiece from Mr. Darcy too!
    This is a great poem Michael. I'm speechless at your talent for writing such great verse!
    Magnificent work!
    I love exactly the same lines that Ben likes in this poem! A classic write Michael.