Your Abuse

by My Mistakes   Mar 6, 2008


Tie me up
throw me down
kick my body
all around

punch me here
scratch me there
cut me up
everywhere

fill my void
bruise my soul
denial of
your self-control

bloody hands
broken feet
shadows of
what lies beneath

a soul so tired
body so used
this is how you love me
so abused

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  • 13 years ago

    by peter

    Wow thats poem hits me deeply but good job on how u wrote it keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Siro aKa Gaara

    Very good flow with each stanza. each line is short but gets across a very strong message.

    very well written and worded :)

    the stanza i enjoyed the most was the last one, it sums up the hole poem and is the most powerful part (in my opinion)

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I love it... you should check out 'An Abuse Story' its a poem of mine you might like but anyways... this is great the flow is flawless great job... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Wow.. this is a powerful poem to me right now. it has a lot of meaning and pain to it .. but its a good poem loves

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This one is really well written. very interesting... liked the flow of the poem!

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