GONE

by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX   Mar 6, 2008


Now that I am gone
You can go on living your life
Dont worry about what I used
Ill let you know, it was not a knife

It was painless
Dont worry about me
Worry about yourself; forget
And think how happy you could be

Living my life only ruined yours
I caused pain
And now you know how I felt
I did this so the family can change

This was the only solution
That I could find
To release pain
From my heart and mind

Promise me
You get over the past
Promise to love each other
Let it forever last

I may not have been happy
At the moment I died
Know this I did not
Need anyone by my side

Let the family come together
Thats what I desired for
Be happy
Dont let anymore tears pour

Im GONE

~*there are alot of spelling errors only because this site messes up when i do a Apstrophes *~
thanx for readin

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    'my pain is ur happiness'

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    I think the guilt of ur pain comes from the familys (as a whole) problems and u blame urslef b/c u feel guilty but its not you... (ive got a story if u wanna hear it sometime..) anyways its a truly amazing write!! i love how u dont hold back to show ur emotons through ur poems!!! ur a great writer! keep it up! 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The title is just simple but it has awesome content. I really love your rhyme scheme and I really adore the first and the last stanza. Overall it's 5/5 job.

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    This was really well written. I really related to the guilt of being the reason your families unhappy and this being the only solution.

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