This was really well written. I really related to the guilt of being the reason your families unhappy and this being the only solution.

The title is just simple but it has awesome content. I really love your rhyme scheme and I really adore the first and the last stanza. Overall it's 5/5 job.

I think the guilt of ur pain comes from the familys (as a whole) problems and u blame urslef b/c u feel guilty but its not you... (ive got a story if u wanna hear it sometime..) anyways its a truly amazing write!! i love how u dont hold back to show ur emotons through ur poems!!! ur a great writer! keep it up! 5/5 always
Kate~LSB23

'my pain is ur happiness'