Aww this is really sad. its really really good though hunni well done 10/10 :) try to be strong.

I have got goose pimples reading that poem, soooooo sad, i can physically feel your pain reading that, it was a very very touching poem that must have been hard for you to write.....he would be proud

Awwww this is sooo sad but good like wow

I feel the passion and emotion behind your words. i think what got me the most, even got me to tear up a little, was when you talked about him not being there to watch you graduate. my father recently disowned me and in a sense, i feel that pain as well.
wonderful. keep it up!

This is cute and adorable
but its also sad
but i still liked it