by Jayden Mar 6, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
"Are you okay" |
by Live WeLL
Wow you can really sense your emotion when reading this poem.. I bet it felt good for you to write this poem and let those feelings out.. and it's true.. just those simple words "lets talk" can do a lot ... nice job on this one.. keep it up! and thanks for the comment =) |
by FallingAngel
Nice job, been there and the emotions were amazing. It seemed cramped though maybe if you spaced it out some... but awesome job anyway. Keep it up. |