Nice job, been there and the emotions were amazing. It seemed cramped though maybe if you spaced it out some... but awesome job anyway. Keep it up.

Wow you can really sense your emotion when reading this poem.. I bet it felt good for you to write this poem and let those feelings out.. and it's true.. just those simple words "lets talk" can do a lot ... nice job on this one.. keep it up! and thanks for the comment =)