TELL HIM GIRL.
i like this

Tell him, love the poem,great work.

Well I could definately feel the anger and disappointment throught the poem (towards the other person)
Although i have some suggestions to make the poem better:

For this stanza

"You've broken my heart again
And it wasn't because of her or your life
Your not there anymore
And yes you've hurt me again"

it should be "You're" in the third line.
And I think you should add a comma after
"And it wasn't because of her,"
for pause effect.
Also, maybe put the last "again" into caps.
For more of a dramatic effect.

Then for this line:
"So hears to you and your lies and broken promises"
it should be
"So here's to you and your lies and broken promises"

And then for this:
"I wanted us to back like how we used to be"
it should be
"I wanted us to go back to how we used to be"

AND:

"I'm threw with you"
it should be
"I'm through with you"

And I think the last word in the poem "Me"
you need to capitolize the "e"
so it would be
"ME"

That's all I've got for you, I hope that I helped.

5/5

First off YOU GO GIRL, YOU TELL HIM. Also this is an amazing poem that really makes you feel hate, betral that you must have been feeling when you wrote it. Also you have a really neat style of writing. I generaly go with 4 lines per stanza and it is great to see someone use a different tecniqe so effectively, good job, and great work. 5/5

Waw , strong, nice flow, and i love when you say you dont deserve me, good work 5/5