Um....wow that is pretty deep, it was good because ti flowed well and was very expressive even thought the poem was pretty short. Which is better then a long poem] it kept my interest, and just the hole, fed up theory attitude to it, i was like yeah, i no how you feel...i no how it feels....
really nice,
truely great
=)

That was really dark kind of between poems about life and dark poems, really interesting, great entry for my contest by the way. Just though I'd start commenting a little, dunno if anyone else will enter :P

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