by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx Mar 6, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Accepting defeat is something that i am not Known for doing, but i do it now...I have been defeated by love..i allowed HIM to conquer my heart..I am proud to say I Love him.. When i am with him....NO take that back, all i have to do is be in the same area he is in, and my heart races, when his name is brushed across the lips of others, i notice that i begin to smile and he does the same.. He doesn't have to give me a passionate French kiss to show he cares..All it takes is an innocent kiss on my forehead..and i fall in love over and over again... |
I think this poem is good |
by Kaila
This poem was sort of not put together well |
This is a very touching love poem, very real and personal as the title suggest |
by FallingAngel
Great job, the emotions in it showed clearly and were awsom, keep it up.5/5 |
You're very good at poetically writing. This piece showed a lot of emotion. And it was written wonderfully! Great write! 5/5 |