Cameron

by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx   Mar 6, 2008


Accepting defeat is something that i am not Known for doing, but i do it now...I have been defeated by love..i allowed HIM to conquer my heart..I am proud to say I Love him.. When i am with him....NO take that back, all i have to do is be in the same area he is in, and my heart races, when his name is brushed across the lips of others, i notice that i begin to smile and he does the same.. He doesn't have to give me a passionate French kiss to show he cares..All it takes is an innocent kiss on my forehead..and i fall in love over and over again...
He doesn't look away when he speaks to me...he looks directly into my eyes....he tells me i don't have to say that i love him, he feels it when he holds me..and i feel the same way...He grips me in his arms, and i feel the warmth from his tears fall to my face...Now i do believe that it is possible to cry because you love someone so much.. He is not afraid to hold my hand in public, and they ask him are you in love with her...he looks in my eyes and says yes.. The reason my heart beats, the reason it aches, the reason i cry is because of him..i love him past my heart past my soul..i have to create a new place in my being that is reserved specially for him.....yea thats it, a place just for him.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    I think this poem is good
    Well done keep up the work

    Danielle
    XxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This poem was sort of not put together well
    You might want to try a little bit of a structure
    I think the poem would be a smoother read and alot more people would be interested
    The message was okay it wasn't bad
    try for more emotion
    3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very touching love poem, very real and personal as the title suggest

  • 16 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    Great job, the emotions in it showed clearly and were awsom, keep it up.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    You're very good at poetically writing. This piece showed a lot of emotion. And it was written wonderfully! Great write! 5/5

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