To be honest, this isn't one of your best. I still see some potential in this, but given the recent awesomeness of your work, this sort of falls on the category, "close but no cigar"

lovely words which resound with meaning and power, yet the beat which you created in the first stanza doesn't fit with the rest, it get's a bit chopped up.

As always, the subject which you chosen is good, as it is wide and many people can relate to this, so good job:) but for me, not more than a four.