Awww how cute. I loved that poem.
"I'd coat my lips in sugar,
I'd turn my hair into a strawberry swirl,
I'd cover my face all in chocolate,
Just to be your girl."
^^my fav stanza
Very good job on the flow also. Overall beautifully and perfectly written.
5/5

xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx

Its a very good poem. i love the flow and the wordss. good job!

Aw how so super uper cute i like this one

This poem was so sweet and touching. I can understand that you want to prove your love to him, but please don't lose your identity in the process. I like how you said, "I you'd write music if you take my hand in your hand." So very sweet and I hope that you get your man. Keep up the good work:)

Aww sweet, and very well writen, great flow. good work - keep it up!

xXxSuicidalLovexXx

Aww very sweet!