Ingrid what a sad poem. You hvae packed allot of emotion in this short piece.
Great job!
Love Cindy

NICEE ONE sad and Im sorry if u ever have felt like this.. but it is a good job =]

Wonderful poem Ingrid, full of emotions although it was short

i can feel your pain

Love this short and sweet little gem Ingrid! The one word at the end "loser" makes the whole thing! Great job!

A very heart breaking piece you have here, with such simple works you have expressed such sorrow and pain. Great job!