Comments : The Gambler

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    This to me was a
    suprise. don't
    worry it was a
    good one. and i
    felt really moved
    by your poem
    -One thing though
    you used the words
    (Not an addiction)
    and then in contrast
    (his addiction) I didn't
    know if that was
    how you wanted it
    by just thought
    that i would point it out.
    thanks for the read
    :~) Sam Mayo

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Ah yes the gamblers torment - you penned it well. keep up the good works.