Man it don't matter what they think. Your are living your life to be happy with yourself. To get to a better place. I mean i'm not trying to be religious, but you are living to get to heaven. That's what keeps me going. I mean everyday I try to keep a smile on my face but when stuff goes wrong i always remember one thing. I can do all things with Christ who stregthens me. Anyway awesome poem but umm the last stanza change that "t" to an "I" lol.
-vino