by Beautiful Forever Mar 6, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
So cold, I'm gasping for air, |
by AmirahBbydll
Wow, this poem had me "gasping for air." Truly amazing text, you made everything totally clear with how you wrote this. Well done! 5/5 |
by Hollymariee
Awesome wording , and the flow was virtually flawless . The punctiation is a little off though , I think you should pass that over . I love it , 5/5 |
This is an awsomw kickass poem i love it keep up the good work |
Woow |
Wow this poem was excellent well done, loved your words the flow everything about it |