Angel of Death

by Beautiful Forever   Mar 6, 2008


So cold, I'm gasping for air,
Reaching out for a hand thats not there,
The illusion just laughs in my face,
Then it disappears without a trace,

I'm all alone, freezing on the ground,
Lost in a place, I'll never be found,
Just an image mocking me from the past,
Telling me I'm not going to last,

I try to move, but my body is numb,
Even I can't believe what I've become,
A broken, shattered, empty soul,
That has lost the will to be whole,

I thought I was alone, but thats not true,
Even while I'm dying, I still see you,
But as always, you're out of reach,
Absorbing my knowledge, like a leech,

Erasing my memories one by one,
Smiling as though you're having fun,
But I see you for what you really are,
You're the one who has fallen so far,

You've fallen, away from the light,
Caught in the middle, you're a parasite,
And I laugh as you take my final breath,
While staring up at you, my angel of death.

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmirahBbydll

    Wow, this poem had me "gasping for air." Truly amazing text, you made everything totally clear with how you wrote this. Well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Awesome wording , and the flow was virtually flawless . The punctiation is a little off though , I think you should pass that over . I love it , 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by letmedie2night

    This is an awsomw kickass poem i love it keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Woow

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Wow this poem was excellent well done, loved your words the flow everything about it